The advent of widespread and instant communications in the form of email on the internet has posed another way of miscommunication with your fellow human beings.
This short series of seven articles involves email communications between two individuals.
The series started with People Skills #09 ARTICLE: How to Make People Like You Instantly, when Edith called and welcomed Diane into the community of people utilizing one of the best small business ideas to arrive on the internet in this decade.
Things are not going well for either party in this communication devoid of human personal body language and the sound of hearing the others voice tone.
Diane is still trying to communicate with Edith, but it takes two to define communication. After giving the topic some thought, Diane carefully crafts a letter designed to show both sides of this issue that she is not happy about.
October 15, 2009
The BootCamp needs to make a success of each BootCamp member through training, which in turn, increases your success.
Training requires more immediate feedback than currently exists.
As this is the “test” BootCamp, you must agree that you should learn from this experience also.
In turn, we “test” BootCampers were offered a bonus for bearing with your learning experience.
Up until today’s critique, I have created and submitted multiple articles and videos and had thought that if something was radically wrong with my content, someone, either you or Troy would contact me with immediate feedback.
My original week’s content was always, and still is available on my original blogsite http://DestinyVision.net
My up to date content is http://dianeneilljensen.com which includes not only the first week’s content, but much more and in addition to just the required weekly content, except for my huge error in missing a whole week’s worth of writing. I take full responsibility for that.
So, as of everything created by me up until noonish today, has been totally out of the ballpark.
I suspected, but had no feedback, so on my own have been trying to redo previous content and improve upon it, without feedback from my leaders.
All this week has been consumed with creating more content for my blog, with the content still reflecting my old visions of what my blog needs to portray.
In order to succeed in this current BootCamp, could you please send me immediate and specific critiques which will revise my content attitude. I need to know:
1. If my keywords are wrong and why
2. Parameters for content subject matter
In addition, and considering my wallowing in the dark for the past three or four weeks, please reconsider the bonus matter and let me know my further requirements for earning that bonus.
This is requested with both of our best interests at heart.
Diane starts with “A drop of honey” and does what Carnegie suggests which is to “Begin in a friendly way”.
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